Due to be released by Lilley Press in a matter of days
"Kissing the Wizard," a humorous fantasy short about a shape-shifter from the Okanogan and a warrior from a world called Knuth, is online now in the March issue of The Battered Suitcase. This issue of the zine has a fantasy theme, and as I've come to expect from the TBS editors, they've put together an interesting collection of stories, poems, and artwork by successful artists and authors. I'm happy that my story has been included. I will be even happier if you read it, and the humor lightens your heart.
Congratulations Jason, and thanks for another great read.
Jason Rolfe’s chilling tale “Dead Hands” will appear March 1st in Crossed Genres, an e-zine with an interesting twist: Every month, the stories are based on a synthesis of two genres, for instance Fantasy and Horror. It makes for some interesting reading. In stories such as “Notes on the Evocation of Demons” (The Harrow, August ‘08) and “White Alabaster (The Willows July/August ‘08) Rolfe has already proven his skill at drawing us into the vivid, haunting worlds of his imagination. This story will surely be no exception. Don’t miss it!
"Off Track," by Michael Hultquist, is a startling, disturbing, deeply honest novel, and I want the world to know about it.
It opens at the moment of critical choice in the unblessed life of twelve-year-old Gary Sanderson, the moment when – beaten, frightened, worn down, and powerless but for the cold metal in his hands – he shoots and kills his father. He pulls the trigger too late to save his mother from the man's cruelty. She dies hours later. The action shifts quickly after that to the time four years later when Gary's world tilts from the holding pattern made possible by imposed structure, and the heavy iron pendulum of choice swings belatedly toward him, as unstoppable as the trains that thunder symbolically through Gary's days and nights.
Hultquist has fashioned the novel superbly from start to finish, his prose straightforward but also uniquely creative and beautiful. With impeccable timing and use of atmospheric shift, he foreshadows just enough to keep the reader on track a timid half-step ahead of Gary. Inevitably the moment of denouement barrels down on us and thunders by, leaving Gary stripped of defenses and knowing finally who and what he is and – more importantly – what he is not, and leaving the reader breathlessly thankful.
I purchased this novel and started to read it because I wanted to see what kind of books Lilley Press was publishing. I kept reading because there was nothing I wanted to do more. For anyone who has ever hidden bits of past that seemed they would explode in open air, for every wounded teen and anyone who has ever loved a child, for anyone whose soldiers have come back from war turned inside out by what a soldier has to do, this story will strike and chime like a bell in the night.
Comparisons are flawed by nature, but when I read this novel, I could not help but be reminded in some ways of Chris Crutcher's acclaimed novels for teens. I'm certain the honesty of Gary Sanderson's story would lead some to deem it inappropriate for youth. As happens with Crutcher's works, it may end up on someone's list of banned books. It will be sad if such a reaction prevents it from finding its way to the eyes of one young person who needs to read it. It would be a great shame if, because this is an e-book, because it is published by a small independent house, this novel escapes attention.
As I said, I want the world to know about this book, and for that reason if anyone would like to quote, post, paste, print, or otherwise reproduce my remarks, they are free to credit me and do so, with my thanks.
A Fly in Amber has published its anniversary issue, and my YA short story, "The Day After Valentine's" is included. I got a chance to skim some of the other stories, and I'm proud that my story is
And by the way... lest I forget, even though this particular story didn't hang around my house long enough to collect a lot of feedback, every bit of success any of my writing enjoys is the result of lots of help from others. Now seems a good time to say thanks. So, to Jason R, Tom B, Karla K, Ron P, Kim M, Darya K, KAK, Terri, Jessica, Steve, and everyone else who helps, thank you. For guidance on TDAV in particular, big thank you to Kevin McColley.
I've finally figured out how to access some more sophisticated Wordpress themes for Worlds Well Written, my blog and discussion site for writers and readers, and I'm going to experiment over the next few weeks. I'm soliciting opinions! Please stop by and let me know what you think of the way this theme presents information, allows for navigation, and functions as a whole. Your feedback will count for a lot.
While you're there, let's talk about endings - not "The End" endings, but the ones you'd think of with a small 'e'. I've posted a few thoughts on the subject and would love to hear what you have to say.
Good news: my YA short story, "The Day After Valentine's", which is not a romance, will appear November 15th in the online zine, A Fly in Amber , which will coincidentally be marking it's one year anniversary. Congrats to them - survival as a fiction zine is no easy feat, and it seems to me they've done a particularly fine job of it.
Other good news: Karla Lammers' "Three's a Charm", is now appearing in the stylish e-zine Perpetual Magazine. Just click on "Romance" and you'll find the link to Karla's fiction. Once you've read this delightful story, I'm certain you'll join me in congratulating her on well-deserved success.
Check out the Halloween issue (online today) of Tales from the Moonlit Path. Click on the fiction link for some nice bedtime reading.
Yes, it's true, my teensy story (440 words) Zoroaster's Airplane is in there, but another not to be missed is Gregory Hall's Face Your Fears. Definitely a little outside, some laughs along the way. If you click on the "contest winners" link, you will find another one of mine -- Old Bones, Secret Rain, along with a rather light-hearted grand prize winner by E.W. Bonadio (does that name mean 'good god?'), called The Ghost of Merrick Mansion. I think it's worth the clicks.
(Oh, and while you are there, click on the "Horror Family" link at the bottom of the home page, and you can find out a little known fact about my cat, Boudreau.)
Thank you to Tricia Urlaub, editor, and congrats to her on collecting some nice work for this issue (not even counting my stories).
I have not done significant work on Angels and Flames.
I did work on a new evolution of Charlie Chrysalis - almost done, nearing 5,000 words. (You''ll perhaps recall it was 750 to start with.)
I've written a YA story, mainstream, called "The Day After Valentines."
I've begun development on a few ideas ranging from flash to novellette/novella length (but ideas are just that, no matter how developed so they don't count).
Despite myself, I've made substantial progress on the BWT revisions.
Not that anybody's dying to hear all this.
Other news, some new, some old:
Zoroaster's Airplane (flash fiction, 440 words) is slated for the Halloween issue of Tales from the Moonlit Path.
Children, Churches, and Daddies gets my personal award for quckest e-zine submission response. Sub'd last night. Rejected today.
Worlds Well Written is growing. If you are a contributor, be sure and send me your profile for the new contributors page -- if you're not sure what I mean, ask. If you are not a contributor, consider it. Check out the site and if you'd like to post, sign up and let me know you'd like to contribute. We are looking forward to a post by Karla this Wednesday. Sunday's post (from me) is about revision tools. We've got posts on poetry from Ron, on authors from Jason and myself, writing process from Tom.
Jason Rolfe's new site is top quality, like his work in general. He's got a new blog, with an intelligent and intriguing first post.
I should mention here congratulations to these three contributors to Worlds Well Written:
Jason Rolfe: published in The Harrow, accepted for The Willows
Tom Beck: accepted for Liquid Imagination
Ron Pavellas: published in Contemporary Haibun Online
The Blurb:
Reluctant hero Lucky figures he’s had his share of weird. Now he wants nothing more than a normal life. He lives in an abandoned shack that teeters on the edge of a wild and possibly haunted ravine. He knows no family except a yellow dog he raised from a pup. He buys their bread and kibble with money he earns doing laundry for criminals. Still, some days he thinks maybe he’s getting close. Maybe normal is just around the corner.
Then, on his fourteenth birthday, the forgotten world of his lost past comes hunting. On his way to meet a destiny he’d rather do without, he steps through a wizard’s door and is caught up in a whirlwind of ancient war, enemy intrigue, and a quest for a father he didn’t even know he missed.
He wants to think that his involvement in sword fights, magic, and interworld travel is some kind of bizarre accident. He wants to believe that ice-breathing dragons and fire-breathing eagles are a mistake, or a dream, or a bad practical joke. But the truth is that this unlikely life belongs to him. It’s a perfect fit, and he’s got a talent, a talisman, and a mystery childhood to prove it.
He steps up, fights when he has to, and hopes that in the end he’ll get what he really wants – to find the way home. If home is in another world, so what? The wizard told him all he has to do to get there is know who he is and where he wants to go. Those are things he’s learning. Fast.
Beyond the Wizard’s Threshold features a warrior who is not as calm as he looks, a wizard not as confident as he should be, a father not as evil as he seems, and a witch not as human as she used to be. But the bravest, the best, the most magical of all is Lucky, lost Sun Child of a world called Ethra. Off-beat, bewildered, smart but a little confused, in the end he’s a winner, and he comes through with the right stuff at the very moment when all seems lost.
He leaves the evil Ice-Lord Mahl in the dust – his armies scattered, his servant the Witch-Mortaine… well, she’s toast. Lucky’s friends are safe, he’s found his family, and he’s opened the Gateway that leads home. Maybe he’s magical, maybe he’s destined, but he’s worked his miracle with a strong spirit and a good heart. Join him for the ride. It’s a funny, charming, whacky thrill-seekers adventure you’ll never be sorry you took.
Loretta Sylvestre
My writerly ways are somewhat different than JR's, in that I like to cast a wide net at the start and let the story narrow itself down. Still, some level of planning is a prerequisite to writing a novel. For me, both in my completed (but as yet unagented and unsold) YA novel, and in the new projects that I'm working on, that has started with a story kernel and perhaps a premise, then a broad narrative plot/story line, and then painting characters with mostly broad strokes, and adding a few telling details, the same with setting, time and season, and 'props,' if I can borrow the theatrical term. I sometimes write scene-like vignettes that add to my understanding of the characters, and I write down backstory that will likely not, as whole-cloth, make it into the novel. I have to know it, but my reader probably doesn't, at least not in detail, not right away. Whatever I create at this early point, I leave it unedited. Some of it will be tightened up into an outline either before I start writing scenes (which is the base unit of my writing - not chapters - for I find I can and do move scenes around in their entirety) or after the first few are written.
So, this will be sort of bloggish, in an unscheduled, hit or miss kind of way. I've got some things to post right away, and I invite feedback, even if all you want to say is, blech. Of course if you do say blech I'll draw a picture of you as a 3rd grader and throw the poo of large scavenging birds at it, but you are welcome to say it if you want.
So please comment. Danke. Merci. Gracias. Grati. Niawen. Domo Arigato (if I remember Sho-gun right). Pila Mayaya. And thanks, too.
